Showing posts with label Talk For Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Talk For Writing. Show all posts

Saturday, 5 February 2022

Year 2 discuss...'Should Goldilocks be jailed?'

In Year 2 we are learning how to create a balanced argument. Goldilocks has been stealing and breaking things that do not belong to her. This week, we are discussing whether she should or should not go to prison. 

But first, we had to create some wanted posters in order to catch her!







Sunday, 10 October 2021

The Kingston Frost Dragon visits Year 3

For our non-fiction this half term, Year 3 are going to be learning about and text mapping an information text about a dragon called the Kingston Frost Dragon. For our hook, we read an extract from the text that explains what the Frost Dragon would look like.

Have you ever wondered what a Frost Dragon looks like? In fact, they are similar to the majority of dragons. Like most Dragons, they have huge wings, large jaws, a spiny back and a long tail. Typically, they are a sparkling white or silver colour. However, some have been spotted that are an icy blue. 

Furthermore, their teeth are made of diamonds and look like icicles. The main feature of this dragon is the fact that it does not breathe flames. They breathe frost and snow. 

A few dragons of this variety have the ability to breathe on any creature and freeze it to stone, particularly if they feel in danger. Additionally , they all have webbed feet that they use for swimming.

We then used this information to help us create our own Frost Dragons.



















Sunday, 12 September 2021

Tunnels in Year 2!

This week in Year 2 we have been introduced to our new English core text... The Tunnel by Anthony Browne.

As part of our learning, we explored what it would be like to crawl through a narrow tunnel like the characters in the story.

What could be lurking inside? 





Friday, 19 March 2021

Explanation Writing - Year 5

Year 5 are beginning their new unit of work in English - explanation writing. Next week, we will be writing explanations about how our chosen spy gadget works. In order to show our teachers which explanation features we can already use, we wrote explanation texts about the life cycle of these fictional animals! Have a go yourself - we did a great job at making each other laugh while thinking of ideas!

"I liked mixing the life cycles of mammals and amphibians for my creature."

"I decided to make my Hippogriph lay eggs into a fire. I wrote a paragraph about this part of the life cycle."

"I remembered to include a heading, subheadings, opening paragraph and time adverbials. I will need to practise using technical vocabulary."

A Waddlebrock


A Fluffgraw


A Hippogrif





Sunday, 18 October 2020

How to TRAP an Iron Man!

Year 4 have had a brilliant time in English over the last few weeks using Talk for Writing to learn an instructional text for ‘How to Trap an Iron Man’. We learnt about the features of instructions, including how to use imperative verbs and adverbs of manner to write sequences steps. 

Then we adapted our class text and changed it to create our own instructions. We had great fun thinking about the metal objects that might lure the Iron Man into the trap!

Miss Bethell was really impressed with our writing this week. We published our work to create our own leaflets, which parents can hopefully read at our Parents Evenings next week! 

Below are some examples of our fantastic work. Have a lovely weekend.